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Moonflowers death by Hollyleaf1998 Moonflowers death by Hollyleaf1998
I'm really proud with how this turned out, Bluepaws heads shape is a bit odd though, and Moonflowers body is, errm, a bit 'akward'
so other than that, yeah! ^^

EDIT: I fixed up one of Moonflowers ears a bit to make her pose a bit more fitting. ^^;

Character(s)İErin Hunter
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You did a very good job on this peice. Let's start with the pros, hm?

:bulletred: Bluepaw's expression is great, you can really see the horror and despair on it.
:bulletred: The blood looks great, quite realistic. I am seriously LOVING how you did the blood coming from Moonflowers throat, it's amazing :heart:
:bulletred: The anatomy is looking good too, you've got the shape of a cat's head down well, and Bluepaw's leg looks great.
:bulletred: The background really looks good. I love how you did the stormy clouds and the bushes.
And the cons would probably be...
:bulletyellow: Moonflower doesn't look that dead, just ticked off. I can see what you were going for, but I'm afraid you didn't quite capture it. Next time try drawing the eyes wide open and glazed over looking, and maybe have the mouthe open a little.
:bulletyellow: Moonflower's anatomy looks sort of odd, and as you said in the description, a bit awkward looking. I'm not sure how you could fix this, maybe try to draw her front legs stretched out infront of her, instead of at her side?
:bulletyellow: Though the paws look great, Bluepaws left front leg, the one furthest from the veiwer is a bit chubby looking compared to the other one. It may just be me, I'm not sure.
:bulletyellow: There's a line beside Bluepaw's neck, I'm sure it's for her leg. If it is, then it's making it look as if her arm is coming from her head or her neck. It'd probably be better with out that line.

Well, that is my critique, first one too, so I'm not sure if I did well. XD Um...I guess I should just end it here, huh?
Well...uh..bye! :wave:
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Forbidden-Void Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Moonflower just looks like
Oh god
Leave me alone
Why must I have kits
impyoq Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm assuming this person did not have permission to use your art? [link]
AmberCatProductions Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's an amaing drawing!!
onde eu posso ler ou comprar esses livros?
em qual site eu posso ler online ou comprar esses livros
Minnowwater Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I love it! Bluepaw looks really cute but sad. Moonflower looks well......dead!
HawkClawWarrior Aug 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
listen to this song and watch this picture [link] kinda sad
i feel so bad for bluepaw/fur/satr
YAY it has blood, and blood, and death, and gore, AND BLOOD!
Ghostcub Apr 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
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